Week 10. Only two more two go.
We focused this week on verse/refrain songs, which are quite different from verse/chorus songs. The dynamic of refrain songs makes the audience listen more intently than in a chorus form, and is often considered a more sophisticated form of a song since there is no chorus to sing along with.
I tried to do something different this week, something slower, that would fit a great soaring voice. Slow is a work in progress for me: I always tend to rush my music.
While I’m OK with most of the melody/harmony (albeit with a weak bridge perhaps) I think the lyrics have a few rough spots. I feel the story doesn’t come out right — that she left him and now realizes it’s worse than before.
The song clocks in at 2 minutes, so there is room for some improvement.
Wow, listening to this shaky high singing is kinda cute in an odd way. Yikes.
Title: “All alone”
Verse #1
FM7......CM7...
He never told her
FM7...................CM7..
She never felt he was there
Em7................Dm7..
He would always be somewhere
Em7..............CM7..
She would be all alone
Verse #2
She is happy without him
Free she can do what she wants
She can start her new life
He can be all alone
Bridge
Eb6...................Ab6........
Life should have been so much better
....Gm7............
And richer than before
....Eb6...........Ab6..........
But all you do is writing letters
...G7................C#m
Of love and hope for more
Verse #3
You didn't want to be lonely
Live life on your own
Now you know what happens
Now you'll be all alone